People have writer’s block not because they can’t write, but because they despair of writing eloquently.
–Anna Quindlen

I’ve been in a bit of a funk. I received some feedback yesterday regarding chapter one of Hannah and Ben’s story. Once again, much of it focused on the show vs. tell issue. It knocked me off my game a bit; I couldn’t do any writing or editing yesterday because of it. Today I’m back at it–making changes to the first three chapters of In Her Eyes to incorporate more showing. I’ll get back to Hannah and Ben at some point, but I need to get IHE ready to send off for the Barclay Sterling contest.

I got the first spec of my website design yesterday. I like it but I’m still deciding what I think about my picture being one of the main images. It wasn’t my original plan, so I’m giving it some thought.